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Friday, March 16, 2012

My Hope..



                                        
I don’t  care,

perception of other,

leave me alone

and let me suffer.

Seed of my creativity,

waiting for rain

till then...

let me have pain.

I will paint my life,

using the color of rainbow,

Till then...

let it be Black & White.

I am not in haste

will not compromise

till I get,

The treasure of my life.

Death may come,

and kiss me anytime

so what,  if God wants so

I won’t mind…

                ~M.J

11 comments:

  1. nice poem

    ""Seed of my creativity Waiting for rain""" this imagery is very rich in HIndi

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    1. Thank you so much Sujatha:) Felt happy that you liked it:):)

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  2. So what, if God wants so

    I won’t mind…
    ,, respecting god's decision,, the poem tells about your will :)

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  3. "Will Not Compromise till I get my Treasure" Wow. that is so profound. That is what all of us strive for, but only a few have the courage to do so :-).

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    1. Everyone has the potential to do so but sad only a few of them have the courage.
      Thank you so much for your lovely comment:)

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  4. Steel and determination. I wish I were like you! Motivating words.

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    1. Thanks Jenny but I never want that someone should desire to be like me who is so lazy, emotional fool, etc. etc.
      By writing this poem I am just trying to motivate myself n the readers.

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  5. Awww.. once again the poem full of inspiration..
    Well written and I loved the line "Seed of my creativity,Waiting for rain":)

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    1. Thank you so much Sonia:) It is always good to get comment from you:):)

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  6. These are very playful lines;

    "Waiting for rain
    Till then
    Let me have pain
    I will paint my life
    Using the color of rainbow"

    Poem is beautiful and sorry that I missed it earlier...

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