हर एक कहानी का आखरी लम्हा ,
सुना हें, खुशनुमा होता है !
फिर गमगीन क्यूँ है दास्ताँ मेरी अभी तक,
हर लम्हा क्यूँ एक पत्थर सा लगता है! .
चला था जहाँ से,
फिर रुक गया हूँ वहीँ पर,
अब ना तो... कदम साथ देते है
और ना ही दिल के जज़्बात,
रोना आता है खुद पर ,
जब देखता हूँ ,
अपने ये हालात !
बढ़ते हुए कदम,
आज भी लड़खड़ाते है मेरे,
जब भी वो बिताये लम्हे उसके साथ
सामने आते है मेरे .
आखिर कब तक चलेगा
ये सफ़र आँधियों का
और कब सिलसिला बारिश का शुरू होगा
देखना चाहता हूँ वो इन्द्रधनुष
क्या मुझे नसीब होगा ….
~मिथिलेश~
Wah! Kya baat hai! Silsila movie ki yaad aa jaye...Can't express in words, how much I loved it!
ReplyDeleteThanks you so much Saru, I like silsila movie and its song very much..Felt very happy that you liked this so much:)
DeleteAmazing poem. I read it loudly. It has so much meaning and depth to it. Beautiful beyond words.
DeleteAfter this comment of your, I have read this poem so many times and when I saw , you are promoting this poem on your timeline, since then I am flying. Aaj mere zameen par nahi hai kadam:). I told you that I have digestation prob....I dont know how much day I will take digest it.
DeleteThank you so much Saru for again giving me chance to feel different:)
You are one person on blogospehere who truly wants to learn and have improved. You are an evolved writer.:)
DeleteThank you so much for giving me extra dose of your appreciation:)
DeleteHey sorry for the late comment.. I had been to my hometown.. Back 2 work today.. The poem is beautiful as always Mithlash.. Ufff.. Ye dard.. Well expressed.. I have no particular line as my favorite in this as the entire poem seems to be so divine:) Good work:)
ReplyDeleteNo need to say sorry Sonia, the fact is, you came n like this poem, it is more than enough:) Thank you so much:)
DeleteNice one!Everyone awaits a rainbow in life!
ReplyDeleteYes you are right everyone awaits rainbow , thank you so much for liking it.
DeleteWonderful writing :) Every line was so deep.. You're really good at writing in hindi :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Philo for appreciating my work and my work:)
DeleteRUK JAANA NAHI TU KAHIN HAAR KE, KANTON ME HAIN CHALTE BAHAR KE......
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog sir:) it is really a wonderful song and quite motivating too...After this comment of your I wont stop myself for sure...Thank you so much:)
DeleteIts the true condition , and u portrayed it so well..:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ruchi, you got the essence of my poem correctly and thank you so much for appreciating it:)
Deletesuch longing in this poem Mithlash! lovely!
ReplyDeleteand i so like the way that word "khushnuma" brings out the euphoria of love
Thanks Sujatha n I was missing not only you but your comment too:) Thanks for your lovely n nice comment:)
ReplyDeleteबहुत अच्छा लिखा है आपने मिथलेश भाई! शुभकामनाएं!
ReplyDeleteMere blog mein apka swagat hai aur sukriya apki sarahna ke liye... Umeed karta hoon aap doobara zaroor ayenge:)
Deletebhai bohat dard hai teri poem mai
ReplyDeletePriyank apni id asli naam se bana...waise Thanks for your appreciation:)
Deletevery well written and the words are being use so aptly .. liked ur poem. :)
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog n thank you so much for your appreciation n liking my poem:) ...If you don't mind, may I know your name?
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