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Friday, May 18, 2012

सफ़र...

                                        


                                                 
हर  एक  कहानी  का  आखरी  लम्हा ,
सुना  हें, खुशनुमा  होता  है !
फिर  गमगीन  क्यूँ  है  दास्ताँ  मेरी  अभी  तक,
हर  लम्हा  क्यूँ  एक  पत्थर  सा  लगता  है! .
चला  था  जहाँ  से,
फिर  रुक  गया  हूँ  वहीँ  पर,
अब  ना तो...  कदम  साथ  देते  है
और  ना  ही  दिल  के  जज़्बात,
रोना  आता  है  खुद  पर ,
जब  देखता  हूँ ,
अपने  ये  हालात !
बढ़ते  हुए  कदम,
आज  भी  लड़खड़ाते  है  मेरे,
जब  भी  वो  बिताये  लम्हे  उसके  साथ
सामने  आते  है  मेरे .
आखिर  कब  तक  चलेगा 
ये  सफ़र  आँधियों  का
और कब   सिलसिला  बारिश  का  शुरू   होगा 
देखना  चाहता  हूँ  वो  इन्द्रधनुष 
क्या  मुझे  नसीब  होगा ….
       ~मिथिलेश~

24 comments:

  1. Wah! Kya baat hai! Silsila movie ki yaad aa jaye...Can't express in words, how much I loved it!

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    1. Thanks you so much Saru, I like silsila movie and its song very much..Felt very happy that you liked this so much:)

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    2. Amazing poem. I read it loudly. It has so much meaning and depth to it. Beautiful beyond words.

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    3. After this comment of your, I have read this poem so many times and when I saw , you are promoting this poem on your timeline, since then I am flying. Aaj mere zameen par nahi hai kadam:). I told you that I have digestation prob....I dont know how much day I will take digest it.
      Thank you so much Saru for again giving me chance to feel different:)

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    4. You are one person on blogospehere who truly wants to learn and have improved. You are an evolved writer.:)

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    5. Thank you so much for giving me extra dose of your appreciation:)

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  2. Hey sorry for the late comment.. I had been to my hometown.. Back 2 work today.. The poem is beautiful as always Mithlash.. Ufff.. Ye dard.. Well expressed.. I have no particular line as my favorite in this as the entire poem seems to be so divine:) Good work:)

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    1. No need to say sorry Sonia, the fact is, you came n like this poem, it is more than enough:) Thank you so much:)

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  3. Nice one!Everyone awaits a rainbow in life!

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    1. Yes you are right everyone awaits rainbow , thank you so much for liking it.

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  4. Wonderful writing :) Every line was so deep.. You're really good at writing in hindi :)

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    1. Thank you so much Philo for appreciating my work and my work:)

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  5. RUK JAANA NAHI TU KAHIN HAAR KE, KANTON ME HAIN CHALTE BAHAR KE......

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    1. Welcome to my blog sir:) it is really a wonderful song and quite motivating too...After this comment of your I wont stop myself for sure...Thank you so much:)

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  6. Its the true condition , and u portrayed it so well..:)

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    1. Thanks Ruchi, you got the essence of my poem correctly and thank you so much for appreciating it:)

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  7. such longing in this poem Mithlash! lovely!

    and i so like the way that word "khushnuma" brings out the euphoria of love

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  8. Thanks Sujatha n I was missing not only you but your comment too:) Thanks for your lovely n nice comment:)

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  9. बहुत अच्छा लिखा है आपने मिथलेश भाई! शुभकामनाएं!

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    1. Mere blog mein apka swagat hai aur sukriya apki sarahna ke liye... Umeed karta hoon aap doobara zaroor ayenge:)

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    1. Priyank apni id asli naam se bana...waise Thanks for your appreciation:)

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  11. very well written and the words are being use so aptly .. liked ur poem. :)

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  12. Welcome to my blog n thank you so much for your appreciation n liking my poem:) ...If you don't mind, may I know your name?

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