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Tuesday, May 1, 2012

Its My Birthday...



Cool  breeze blowing…
Everyday,
Like wind is celebrating
Its birthday.
She invited all, except the dust,
Because she didn’t  want, anyone to disturb
Sky, Moon, Star, Rain,
everyone was there.
Just to capture the moment,
lightening – A professional photographer was also there.
As the wind-blow the candle off
All clapped and sang B’day song.
Lightening was clicking…
this glorious moment,
though the moon was shinning less than half,
he preferred smiling rather than laugh.
Here on earth,
Sensual dance of trees with breeze,
Were stirring honey in my soul,
Standing on my roof top,
I was witnessing this metaphor…

          ~Mithlash~

14 comments:

  1. That is such a beautiful expression. Simply loved these lines,

    "Though the moon was shinning less than half,
    he preferred smiling rather than laugh."

    Ending of the poem is brilliant!

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    1. Thank You so much Saru for your appreciating words. These lines are favourite of mine too.

      Though I was doubtful about the ending of the poem but after your comment, I am so happy:):)

      BTW...why you missed my previous post???

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    2. Again, I missed your poem? Something is definitely wrong on my side...

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    3. Saru you don't worry about me...you take care of your reader ...I'll remind you whenever you'll miss my poem.
      Take care....

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  2. Happy bday...:)
    AM happy to see star. moon and rain, everybody invited on your bday...

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    1. Ruchi ma'am its not my b'day but in my imagination wind was celebrating its b'day...Don't worry I'll convey your message to her:)

      Thank You so much Ruchi for your comment:)

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  3. agree with Saru - that thought and that expression of the moon smiling is so unique

    and of course, Happy Birthday :)

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    1. I am so happy Sujatha and thank you so much for liking the same line which is my favourite too:)

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  4. aww.. What a lovely imagination Mithlash:) Your poem can drift anyone to a beautiful world of fantasy:) Good on:)

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    1. Thank You so much Sonia for your beautiful and encouraging comment...Its lovely to get comment from you:)

      BTW...Thank you so much and Keep coming:)

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  5. what an Imagination. Hats off. Wonderful read and Happy Birthday :-)

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    1. Thank you so much Ashwini Ma'am for your awesome comment. Hope this comment of your, will definately boost my confidence.
      Thank You once again:)

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