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Friday, February 3, 2012

मेरी तनहाइयाँ...





यहाँ में बिलकुल अकेला, बिलकुल तनहा


कहीं खो सा गया हूँ 


पानी में आये बवंडर सा हो गया हूँ 


ना जाने कब थमेगी ये लहेरे


ना जाने कहाँ अंत होगा 


मेरी इन तन्याहियो का आखिर भला क्या  होगा...

                            ~मिथिलेश





28 comments:

  1. Wow wow wow.. These words are just killer.. There is no language in the world as pleasant as Hindi.. Honestly speaking I just missed a beat when I read these beautiful words.. And I have read it more than 10 times before commenting cos every time I read it I felt some kinda pinch inside my heart.. Amazing.. I guess this is ur 1st poem in Hindi, I request u to pls pen some more Hindi lines like these..

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    1. After reading your comment I felt the same and I too missed a beat and I have read your comment 20 times till now and You are right this is my first hindi poem... whenever I try to write in hindi only emotional stuff comes out so I avoid to write in Hindi..But if you are saying so I will definately try...overall Thank you so much for your awesome comment:):)

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  2. Can relate myself completely with the post.. I can keep commenting 100 times in appreciation of these lines.. Since the language used is Hindi, it is giving a life to these lines:)

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  3. you know Mithlash i just want to say one thing: Pls write in Hindi. this poem was lovely

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    1. Thank you so much:)...if you are saying so I'll try to write in Hindi as well:):)

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  4. जैसे हर रात की सुबह आती है वैसे ही तन्हाई भी ज्यादा देर तक नहीं रहती ...
    आशा बनाए रक्खें ... अच्छा लिखा है ..

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    1. बिलकुल सही कहा आपने हर रात के बाद एक सवेरा होता है और ये आशा ही है जो इस तन्हाई का अंत लाती है !
      धन्वाद अपने ख़ूबसूरत विचार अभिव्यक्त करने के लिए !

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  5. Hindi writing somehow gives a very different feel. I can't write in hindi. I'll barely know how to form a sentence :P You did a great job. Short lines, but the depth could be felt :) Do write more :)

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    1. yes Hindi writing gives entirely different feeling. You dont need to change your style..You are absolutely perfect in your style..Thank you so much for appreciating my work..I'll try to write more:)

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    2. Yes, I'm looking forward to read more from you :)
      Thank you for appreciating my work too :D

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  6. Your first hindi poem? Hard to believe. Really nice. :)

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  7. WOW...Your first hindi work. I am so excited to read it. It's beautiful beyond words. I loooovved it...

    Sorry for a late comment, was not well from few days...:)

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  8. No worry

    Your comment is like ISI mark for me...don't worry take of yourself...Ab kaisi Ho...?

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  9. har raat subah lekar aati hai ...har tanhai ke baad khushi bhi aati hai , jindagi ki lahare ....har pal naya manjar de jati hai

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    1. Kya baat hai Shashi Ma'am-Marvellous lines...and welcome to My Hope..itni sundar panktiyan abhivyakt karne ke Dhanyavaad!

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  10. How amazingly you have written the poem with the meaning words of our national language. It came out so beautifully and you have explained about - Thanhayi - very well. Splendid poetry!


    http://www.rachelspassion.blogspot.com

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  11. Intense Mithlash! To write in hindi is tough!Lovely!

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    1. Thanks Jenny & Welcome to My Hope...Hope to see you again :)

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  12. lovely words... beautifully crafted...you can almost feel these lines!

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  13. Emptiness all around..nothing is painful to be alone wid tears..

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    1. Yes you are right, nothing is painful to be alone wid tears..Thank You so much for visiting and Welcome to My Hope:)

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    1. No need to say thank you Philo:) I'll come again and again without your permission:)

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  15. ग़ज़ब की कविता ... कोई बार सोचता हूँ इतना अच्छा कैसे लिखा जाता है

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