आज में अपनी खामोशियों से डरता हूँ
फिर दोनों हाथ खाली है मेरे
दिल के ज़ज्बात भारी है मेरे
इनको संभालना अब मेरे बस की बात नहीं
इतने सारे गमो को दिल का कौन सा कोना दूं
इन गमो को आखिर कौन सा भरोसा दूं
चाहते हैं ये भी बहार आना
गिर न जाए ये आंसू
शायद इसलिए डरता हूँ
आज में अपनी खामोशियों से डरता हूँ ...
~M.J
इतने सारे गमो को दिल का कौन सा कोना दूं
ReplyDeletei liked this line very much Mithlash ....it says a lot with just few words
Thank You so much Sujatha and I am happy you liked it:):):)
Deletei realy liked this one..इतने सारे गमो को दिल का कौन सा कोना दूं
ReplyDeleteइन गमो को आखिर कौन सा भरोसा दूं
Thank you Ruchi ma'am and I am very happy you liked it:)
DeleteKhamoshi toh tufaan ke aane ki sambhavana deti hai.. So zaada khamoshi bhi sehat ke liye thik nahi hai.. Loved the lines too much.. Very soulful as always..:) Oh Gosh!!! the beauty of these lines can't be described.. Wonderful Work:)
ReplyDeleteYou are right Sonia, zyada khamoshi bhi sehat ke liye thik nahi........Thank you so much for appreaciating and liking it:)
DeleteBTW I am waiting for your next post:)
heyyy new photo?? it's really nice. kisi party ka hai kya?
ReplyDeletemast hat :))
ab toh sallu bhai ko nikalo, aur iss photo ko daalo :D
My Nephew B'day pic and Thank you so much for your lovely compliments...
DeleteLekin ye pic itni bhi acchi nahi hai aur mujhe darr hai ye pic lagate mere readers gayab na ho jaaye:)
bahut hi maasoomiyat sey khamoshi k jazbaaton ko bayan kiya hai aapne....
ReplyDeleteSukriya aur aapka swagat hai mere blog par..
Deletehhmmmm why so serious young mannnnnn.....just share these "BHARI JAZBAAT" with ur loved ones and I am sure you will feel much relieved....
ReplyDeleteand yes, that facebook badge pic does look very cute...is it you...???
I dont know whenever I write in Hindi only the sad emotion comes out....Thanks for your nice advice and thank you for the pic compliments and It is me:)
DeleteAree, they didnt commit sucide, they were suffering wid cancer or any disease at last stage in my poem..apne ek naya hi interpretation de diya, jo ab mujhe bhi lagrha padne per poem.. thnkss..
ReplyDeleteSorry Ruchi ma'am but if they were suffering wid cancer or any disease at the last stage, thats does not give authority to commit suicide. Again the positive outlook is missing, rather than showing fighting spirit or live their life joyfully , They committed suicide..Hope I am making sense
DeleteCheers!
I think one of the best poems you have written till date. It sounds like the one which we used to hear in the 80s movie...
ReplyDeleteLoved every bit of it...Too too too good...:)
Awww....I think this is your best comment till date:)
DeleteThank you so much Saru..Its means a lot to me:):):)
I dont know after getting this comment of your...It is giving me immense pleasure. You commented earlier also on my blog but this one is entirey different:) Thank you so much Ashwini ma'am:))
ReplyDeleteसार्थक और बेहद खूबसूरत,प्रभावी,उम्दा रचना है..शुभकामनाएं।
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