Thursday, January 5, 2012

I dont want to be straight line

The straight line,
desire everyone,
its means,
they don’t want to stop,
but constantly want to gallop...
neither wants breaker nor any full stop.
If they,  confront anyone of these,
they don’t feel please.
Have you asked?
A straingt line
what its desire is,
it also want to go,
up and down,
and want a twist,
nor it wants,
any moment to miss,
So everything is vital,
in life,
If possibl,
Understand the language of life...
Inspiration taken from Sujatha tweet.


  1. Profound work Mithlah. Very crisp and fine writing. A moral does wonder to the poem. Keep up the awesome work :)

    @Sujatha- Even your tweets are invaluable:)

  2. Mithlash, wow i was surprised to see my name
    and you've converted it so finely into a poem

    thanks Saru :) acutally woh mere lines nai sms aaya usey tweet kiya ..asli hakdaar ka toh patha bhi nai

  3. @Saru Singhal: Thank you so much Saru ma'am for your appreciation. It means a lot to me. You have no idea how much happy I am:)

    @Sujatha Sathya: Thank you so much Sujatha ma'am for your appreciation.Thanks to you and give my thanks who sent that message.

    It means a lot to me when two versatile bloggers of blogshpere appreciating my work.:)

  4. Hey Mithlash - hope you are doing good.

    one word - its super. i love your poems

    love x

    1. Comment of your will surely boost confidence a new Blogger like me:) Thank you so much for your wonderful comment:)))

  5. I love this. Life has ups and downs, because life is moving like a wheel as earth rotate on it's axis... it's not bad to be optimistic, but it's bad not to accept failures, in life we have to learn from our mistakes to become even better and smarter in the coming days :)

    P.S. I am sincerely inviting you to submit your blog at our New! SB Blog Directory powered by linkytools. See you my friend...

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    1. Thanks Prime Aque yes up n down of life and both are important for complete life and I will submit my blog.:)

  6. Straight line= monotonous living :)
    Nice one!!

    1. Thanks!! And yes you are absolutely right.


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